Aet Lindling

Reading the Keira chapters may explain why Garrett feels guilty about his job, when considered alongside chapter two. Winky face. But also, I%u2019m writing chapter five through nine to fill ...

You%u2019re in luck when chapter 5 comes out! Enjoy the slot machines winky face

At the risk of giving away a twist much larger than Elliot%u2019s true nature%u2026 the nature of the narrator justifies these things. Thank you a ton for this great review ...

I love that you hate the narrator. I think you%u2019ll love the ending.

No problem! It was stressful having to learn this stuff taking on a job as an editor in chief of a publication, now I must pass on the gifts hahaha

Thank you very kindly for this thoughtful review! Youll be pleased to know the chapter one I have up already is in fact final, so no worries there. As far ...

Thank you for your kind review, and thank you for submitting it as a comment so I%u2019m still qualified for the lowly 0 review position in the Green Room ;)

Indeed! Also, as far as %u201Cyou%u201D I%u2019m using a not super common but valid rhetorical device where the writer is literally referring to the reader and saying that any given ...

Excellent, you're experiencing things pretty much exactly as I wish at this point then! Haha. Keira is meant to seem sympathetic and troubled at first but eventually become basically Joffrey ...

and you pretty much nailed it as far as why the thinker talks differently

Thank you for the useful critique! WRT the Adorno reference, here ya go: 'Technology is making gestures precise and brutal, and with them men. It expels from movements all hesitation, ...

She%u2019s by far my favorite main character to write and the only one I see myself in (Keira just has random bits of me but is nothing like me) so ...

Feeling good about where Keira is at now. I think I’ve successfully portrayed most facets of her character at this point. I’ll likely move onto other perspectives now, continuing Valerie’s ...

Some amazing thoughts! Thank you as always for your insight. I was quite proud of that use of %u201Cantepenultimate%u201D although I must confess it came out of a facetious using ...

Most of this was written in 2021, and set later than it should’ve been as it turned out a couple years later once ChatGPT had made its mark. But it ...